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63 - Minute Worlds by LauraDraghici 63 - Minute Worlds by LauraDraghici
"E dat acestui trist norod
Si oul sterp ca de mâncare,
Dar viul ou, la vârf cu plod,
Făcut e să-l privim la soare!

Cum lumea veche, în clestar,
Înoată, în subtire var,
Nevinovatul, noul ou,
Palat de nuntă si cavou.

Din trei atlazuri e culcusul
În care doarme nins albusul
Atât de gales, de închis,
Cu trupul drag surpat în vis.

Dar plodu ?
De foarte sus
Din polul plus
De unde glodul
Pământurilor n-a ajuns
Acordă lin
Si masculin
Albusului în hialin :
Sărutul plin.

*

Om uitător, ireversibil,
Vezi Duhul Sfânt făcut sensibil?
Precum atunci, si azi -- întocma :
Mărunte lumi păstrează dogma.


Să vezi la bolti pe Sfântul Duh
Veghind vii ape fără stuh,
Acest ou -- simbol ti-l aduc,
Om sters, uituc.

Nu oul rosu.
Om fără sat si om nerod,
Un ou cu plod
Îti vreau plocon, acum de Paste :
Îl urcă -- în soare si cunoaste !

*

Si mai ales te înfioară
De acel galben icusar,
Ceasornic fără minutar
Ce singur scrie când să moară
Si ou si lume. Te-înfioară
De ceasul, galben necesar...
A mortii frunte -- acolo-i toată.
În gălbenus,
Să roadă spornicul albus,
Durata-înscrie-în noi o roată.
Întocma -- dogma.

*

Încă o dată :
E Oul celui sterp la fel,
Dar nu-l sorbi. Curmi nuntă-în el.
Si nici la closcă să nu-l pui !
Îl lasă -- în pacea -- întâie-a lui,

Că vinovat e tot făcutul,
Si sfânt, doar nunta, începutul."


Ion Barbu - Oul dogmatic

As once twas' , it will be always
Minute worlds preserve the dogma.


special thank yous to :spotlight-left:~Thrashtodeath:spotlight-right: for htranslating this amazing poem by one of my favourite writers.

special thank yous to :spotlight-left:=a14onymus:spotlight-right: for all the support.

This deviation cannot be reproduced without my written permission.

© Laura Draghici


UPDATE - this deviation has been entered in the S C A R L E T____C O N T E S T at #Erotic-Lens. You cand find information about the contest here [link]
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snarkk Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
мир на 63 минуте, может так выглядеть только в 3 -ю минуту послу оргазма. (имхо)
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kahrisah Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010
oh gosh.
this is beyond amazing!!
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MiisSHaPpY Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
I Love It A Lot
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FanFrye24 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
you are featured here [link]
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earthlab Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
excelent !!
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ersatz-moon Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
congratulations! you have been featured here [link]
please fave the news article and some of the other works, to get your picture out there!
:blowkiss:
hugs
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Rukia1000 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Congrats on winning! You have been featured in #YoungButInspired's latest blog!
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tam2u Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
Your winning entry for the #Abstract--Reality Energy contest has been featured in the #Artistic-Maneuvers blog. Congrats and a job well done :clap:
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honeyroastedfrost Featured By Owner May 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. I used to love doing that when I was little.
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panifajna Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
fantastic! :heart:
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WildRainOfIceAndFire Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Professional Photographer
:clap: :clap: :clap: Felicitari! Deviatia ta este una dintre cele mai bune ale lunii Martie pe #BucurestiClub :clap: :clap: :clap:

Gasesti topul aici: [link] :iconrafainsanityplz: Nu uita sa votezi! :iconrafainsanityplz:
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slickdj3 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2010
Very beautifull and simple...
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010   Photographer
thank you :hug:
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aDisturbingCarol Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2010
I love it!
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ALEXANDRA-BANUT Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010
you have been featured here
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take a look and please let me know what you think of this article.
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2010   Photographer
pai e foarte tare, ce sa cred :) ma bucur ca ai inclus si fotografia mea.
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Loriele Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010  Student General Artist
Congrats, you've been featured here [link] please be sure to fave the article to help yourself get seen and to check out the other works there :D
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Knight-Nighter Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010  Hobbyist
a very interesting photo, the lighting's great! :)
great shot :D
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010   Photographer
:hug: thanks :D
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louuh Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
i really enjoy this. nice work(:
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010   Photographer
:iconthank-youplz:
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Vividlight Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2010
Journal Feature
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cacodemonic Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010  Student Photographer
I'm really lovin' this...great great great :wow:
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010   Photographer
:blush:
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cacodemonic Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010  Student Photographer
You're welcome =D
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Junepolars Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
wonderful!
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010   Photographer
:bow:
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Vividlight Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
stunning:faint:
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010   Photographer
:bow:
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elementalunacy Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
...i think you made great use of light in this shot...nice...
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010   Photographer
i am happy you like it :hug:
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Wonder-Design Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
great.
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010   Photographer
thank you so much :hug:
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surreal-lover Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010
Very creative =)
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010   Photographer
:hug:
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secret-luck Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010
this is neat :D

xx.
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010   Photographer
:D thanks :hug:
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porbital Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010   Photographer
perfect photo!!
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010   Photographer
you really think so? thank you so much :hug:
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porbital Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010   Photographer
glad to feature your work. : [link]
:)
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2010   Photographer
:boogie: :hug:
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bonapuella Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
very eerie. nice job!
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010   Photographer
:D thanks
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iuliana13 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010
Featured here: [link] :love:
Don't forget to :+favlove: it :D
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Featured here: [link] :love:
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Featured in the news : [link] :heart:
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allieweasley Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010  Student General Artist
That light...wow. It's so simple and illuminating.
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LauraDraghici Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010   Photographer
thank you :hug:
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zaz14ispottermad Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2010  Student Photographer
CONGRATULATIONS
YOU HAVE JUST BEEN FEATURED IN MY JOURNAL
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CONGRATS ON SUCH A STUNNING PIECE OF ART
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Mickieh Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2010
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