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13 - Yourself

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model: Andreea

fULL VIEW.

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© Laura Draghici
Image size
2592x2592px 3.96 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Shutter Speed
1/1000 second
Aperture
F/4.5
Focal Length
33 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
May 25, 2008, 5:35:46 PM
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minotauro9's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Excellent reflection with a good "urban" feeling and interesting dark tones.
I'm a maniac of reflections and this is one i'd like to have done myself.
The square format works fine and there's a good balance in negative space.
I like you've reverted, as i usually do in these cases and i like you've included the "original" legs and feet, and i also like the shape of the pond that calls those "clouds" used in comics to express speech or thoughts, and i like to think that what we're looking at is the representation of the person's thoughts and dreams.
I'd dodge and burn a little to make thing more visible: i'd lighten the pond on the left of the figure to make it more visible and i'd also lighten a little around the legs, always to make them more distinct, and i'd probably darken a tad the top right corner to "close" it a little.
And finally an increase of the texture of the ground would be great in my view (a tonal contrast filter applied selectively)
Excellent image indeed!